fix the essay

1. fix the essay:

This essay needs to be at least two full pages and discussed fully instead of working in the bullet point comments of first (discuss Semuels fully) second (discuss Childtrends fully) , finally (discuss the costs and benefits for the government) terms. Conclusion: Please restate your thesis, offer the benefits to society and give your reader a call to action to support this proposal.
Please see your editing notes for revision purposes before submitting your final draft.
Formatting issues: PLEASE CREATE A TITLE THAT REFLECTS YOUR TOPIC
Please place that title at the top of your essay.
MUGs issues:
ETS e-rater found: Run-on, article usage 2, spelling 2.
Angstadt found: lowercase elected /policymakers
spelling — homelessness
singular form– current
Semuels–Expand this discussion — more than three sentences are required for this discussion point.
missing word– to ensure that there will be no homeless children in America.
Childtrends– Please discuss the evidence-based approaches for addressing homelessness.
Government committee to issue and monitor funds for homeless children: discuss the cost and benefits for the government
Conclusion: Please restate your thesis, offer the benefits to society and give your reader a call to action to support this proposal.
Reference page: Please fix your spacing in the Berg entry.
Berg entry: Please see APA for proper use of capitals in article titles on the Reference page: Uppercase What lowercase c c d t y p h h f
Childtrends entry: Please see APA for proper use of capitals in article titles on the Reference page: Uppercase Children lowercase y e h
Semuels entry: Please see APA for proper use of capitals in article titles on the Reference page: Uppercase How lowercase c us e h